AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA JUST CHECKED OUT THE LATEST UPDATE AND I EXPLODEDDD!!! AMAZING! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREEEEEEEEE D8 THIS VN IS OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!!!!!!
That was an amazing read, my expectations were set pretty high after reading the comments, but damn it really delivered!
The writing is phenomenal, and I lol'd a considerable amount of times. All characters are really well written imo but Byte takes the cake for me.
Can't wait for the next build that's coming next week, thanks so much for your work and keep it up! This story and VN as a whole has so much potential, can't wait to see what there is in store for us.
To anyone considerating giving it a go, I highly suggest you do It grabs you during the first 10 mins and doesn't let go (played the entire thing in one sitting, and it's by no means short for a first build).
This is by far the best VN I've read. Usually there's a certain point where I quickly tap through to see the CG's but never once did I do it with this. Also build one is actually longer than expected, and it really gets you invested. I have fallen in love with Loken and can't wait to see where things go.
this story was actualy really interesting and gave me actualy a few hour of reading. Would defenitly think to throw money at this project if there is a patreon that open some day.
really good work! thank you so much for choosing for the mc to 1. actually have a personalty, and 2.not be the copy paste white twink that every other human fvn mc is.
Reading about the Demons, I can't help but think of the Reapers from Mass Effect. I suspect that (if they are technology), they can emit some kind of radiation that affects the minds of living things.
The blackrunners reminded me of the stalkers in the s.t.a.l.k.e.r video game series and that made me love it even more as I really like those games. I enjoyed every minute of it and can't wait for the next update and spend more time with Loken but also find the answer to all those questions that came up, I have my theories but I have to wait.
Really enthralling tbh, already read it through twice over to make sure I got everything. The premise, world, and art are all awesome, very much looking forward to the next update.
Byte couldn't scan Loken when Alex was freaking out a little, it would be weird of byte was able to scan it while he was overwhelmed by looking at a Demon. There's no way for Byte to scan it without Alex also looking at it, which he currently cannot do.
It's explicitly stated that Alex cannot learn more about the Demons without further training or suffering as a result. It would also be weird pacing wise to just already be figuring stuff out about one of the key points of intrigue of the story on build one.
Wouldn't scanning it be the best way to understand it and figure out what's it's doing that causes such a reaction so they can better handle it. If Byte couldn't do anything during the panic attack he should have made that more clear, or maybe come up with a plan (dulling all of our senses maybe) or discuss it shortly and say they shouldn't mess with it unless Loken said so than just outright ignore it completely.
Imo, it wouldn't cause any pacing issues, it's just figuring out what the Demons are doing to us, it can still be made ambiguous if it's magic, science or whatever.
Hello creator. It doesn't seem you're replying to any of the comments here, but I thought I'd throw this out if you ever decide to reply. This might be sort of spoiler, and you might not want to answer this, but I just wanted to ask — will the MC ever get to top in this game? Warnings mentioned sexual activity, so the stuffs probably gonna be in the game, but before I get invested into the game, I just wanted to get this out of the way just in-case it wasn't an option. If it wasn't, this game just wouldn't be for me. I'm fine with having options/taking turns etc. bottoming and topping, but I can't play a game with the MC 100% bottom. Again this might be a spoilers, and you might also just decide not to answer, but thank you for reading this!
Eh, that's a shame. I only played the first 20 minutes of it, but really liked the writing. Hope everything turns out alright, and everyone enjoys it. Good luck creator, this is some good stuff you've got here
Unfortunate, but not surprising or much of a dealbreaker imo. An option to skip those scenes (when and if they do come) to some extent would be nice though, assuming there's no essential characterization in the lewd scenes. If not, it's fine anyway, just a matter of personal preference for the most part.
Holy shit, I gotta say, I love this one. My main issue with most of the other VNs where you kinda "stranded in another World" kind of theme, is that they always feel like a Stockholm Simulator xD Thats why I liked Blackgate so much before it's fall. This one actually feels really "Realistic" and logical.
Please keep up the good work! You are doing wonderfully. It's already way better Story wise then Some of the others like Adastra and FBTW imo
This. Game. Is. SO FRICKIN' AWESOME! You really made a good job and you already have a fan!
(Spoilers!)
You know... I wouldn't mind a few guys taking turns with me at Indulgence, although I know our overprotective husky wouldn't allow it that (not that I care about that personality type), but that begs the question: How does the Illayla's world see homosexuality? Also, the only thing I didn't like about the game was the "tooth story"...
I don't know, I felt kind of sad...
But, besides that, thanks so much for making this game! You're awesome! You have all my support and admiration, which doesn't seem much, but is genuine! Believe me!
I got to say the story is beautiful. The characters and how they act, the background and lore and hell IT EVEN HAS FUNNY MOMENTS HERE!!!! I love how you do this story its spontaneous. I hope you continue the story I really do.
How do I monetarily support you? Is there any way? I know you said this is a non-commercial project, but it's so good that I want to support you in some way! The visuals, the writing, the story, the audio (!!!), and (particularly important for visual novels) the pacing is just perfect. All of it is perfect. This is top tier stuff, Ryuo!
Really enjoyed this, really funny and love the sarcasm. Hardly any vn's where you play a human like this which is great! was getting tired of playing games and you play a character that is always needing help and is delicate and has to be looked after. Such a great change having a human you play with a fun attitude and does not need baby sitting. Great job! cant wait for the next update you got my full support with this.
Wow, that was very captivating! I couldn't stop playing and got the (current) end in one go :)
Spoilers:
Very interesting world, looking forward to see the Automonks and the Dark Lands. Also, the Infliction, the apocalypse and Byte are all quite intriguing! Looking forward to finding out more there!
The characters are all polished, i loved Aeyon, Byte and the tribeswomen!
The relationship between Loken and the main character is just heartwarming. You can tell they both need each other! I love how Loken wants to improve his speech after being a lone wolf (almost) his whole life. His protectiveness is so cute :D
Please continue this amazing project and you will have a follower forever <3
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great chapter, keep it up.
thank you for this novel
Awesomw update and Vn Looking forwerd to next days with loken.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA JUST CHECKED OUT THE LATEST UPDATE AND I EXPLODEDDD!!!
AMAZING! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREEEEEEEEE D8
THIS VN IS OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!!!!!!
20/10!!!!!!!!! UWÚ
10/10, This is probably my favorite VN right now. Love the writing and I can't wait to see where the story goes!
10/10 havent felt horror like this since echo
Incredibly good, the story keeps you engaged and the characters are very well written. The only con I have is waiting for the next version!
Ahh crap....I had to start a new game. I couldn't continue from my save point.
literally just came in my pants
It's really amazing story, everything looks and works well
NWE VERSION ONLY ONE HOUR LEFT! 🤸♂️
That was an amazing read, my expectations were set pretty high after reading the comments, but damn it really delivered!
The writing is phenomenal, and I lol'd a considerable amount of times. All characters are really well written imo but Byte takes the cake for me.
Can't wait for the next build that's coming next week, thanks so much for your work and keep it up! This story and VN as a whole has so much potential, can't wait to see what there is in store for us.
To anyone considerating giving it a go, I highly suggest you do It grabs you during the first 10 mins and doesn't let go (played the entire thing in one sitting, and it's by no means short for a first build).
This is by far the best VN I've read. Usually there's a certain point where I quickly tap through to see the CG's but never once did I do it with this. Also build one is actually longer than expected, and it really gets you invested. I have fallen in love with Loken and can't wait to see where things go.
I really like it. kept me interested it's a cool story, it's cute and funny. I'll be waiting for the next update.
this story was actualy really interesting and gave me actualy a few hour of reading. Would defenitly think to throw money at this project if there is a patreon that open some day.
wow so good, I'm really going to enjoy this story!
That was one heck of a first build! Looking forward to the rest of the story!
I love the story and keep up the good work🥰🥰🥰
Just found this gem and gotta say the writing is excellent. Will you possibly be doing a patreon page?
really good work! thank you so much for choosing for the mc to 1. actually have a personalty, and 2.not be the copy paste white twink that every other human fvn mc is.
true
So much potential in this, will be definitely checking in the next update. 5/5 ^_^
Reading about the Demons, I can't help but think of the Reapers from Mass Effect. I suspect that (if they are technology), they can emit some kind of radiation that affects the minds of living things.
The blackrunners reminded me of the stalkers in the s.t.a.l.k.e.r video game series and that made me love it even more as I really like those games. I enjoyed every minute of it and can't wait for the next update and spend more time with Loken but also find the answer to all those questions that came up, I have my theories but I have to wait.
As a first build this was very long and very good, giving plenty of time to get accustomed to the world and the characters and setting up the mystery.
thoroughly enjoyed this build and hope to read more in the future.
p.s. byte is the little goblin AI we all need in our lives
Really enthralling tbh, already read it through twice over to make sure I got everything. The premise, world, and art are all awesome, very much looking forward to the next update.
I really like this game, everything about it is so fun and I cant wait for next update, well done <3
I'm kinda frustrated that Byte didn't try to scan the Demon's arm again, like it's right there just do it.
Overall great game.
Byte couldn't scan Loken when Alex was freaking out a little, it would be weird of byte was able to scan it while he was overwhelmed by looking at a Demon. There's no way for Byte to scan it without Alex also looking at it, which he currently cannot do.
I know that but they really wanted to know more about the demons during a part of the game and now that they have a chance to they kinda ignore it.
It's explicitly stated that Alex cannot learn more about the Demons without further training or suffering as a result. It would also be weird pacing wise to just already be figuring stuff out about one of the key points of intrigue of the story on build one.
Wouldn't scanning it be the best way to understand it and figure out what's it's doing that causes such a reaction so they can better handle it. If Byte couldn't do anything during the panic attack he should have made that more clear, or maybe come up with a plan (dulling all of our senses maybe) or discuss it shortly and say they shouldn't mess with it unless Loken said so than just outright ignore it completely.
Imo, it wouldn't cause any pacing issues, it's just figuring out what the Demons are doing to us, it can still be made ambiguous if it's magic, science or whatever.
Hello creator. It doesn't seem you're replying to any of the comments here, but I thought I'd throw this out if you ever decide to reply. This might be sort of spoiler, and you might not want to answer this, but I just wanted to ask — will the MC ever get to top in this game? Warnings mentioned sexual activity, so the stuffs probably gonna be in the game, but before I get invested into the game, I just wanted to get this out of the way just in-case it wasn't an option. If it wasn't, this game just wouldn't be for me. I'm fine with having options/taking turns etc. bottoming and topping, but I can't play a game with the MC 100% bottom. Again this might be a spoilers, and you might also just decide not to answer, but thank you for reading this!
This was a topic of convo in the discord server, but the short answer and I quote: "There's currently no plans for him to, for a number of reasons."
Eh, that's a shame. I only played the first 20 minutes of it, but really liked the writing. Hope everything turns out alright, and everyone enjoys it. Good luck creator, this is some good stuff you've got here
Unfortunate, but not surprising or much of a dealbreaker imo. An option to skip those scenes (when and if they do come) to some extent would be nice though, assuming there's no essential characterization in the lewd scenes. If not, it's fine anyway, just a matter of personal preference for the most part.
Holy shit, I gotta say, I love this one.
My main issue with most of the other VNs where you kinda "stranded in another World" kind of theme, is that they always feel like a Stockholm Simulator xD
Thats why I liked Blackgate so much before it's fall.
This one actually feels really "Realistic" and logical.
Please keep up the good work! You are doing wonderfully.
It's already way better Story wise then Some of the others like Adastra and FBTW imo
I like the story and how the world is built \(@^0^@)/
super Roman Bravo long live the rest of the adventure.
What an amazing first build, you have something special!!
I really liked the game
This jump right into my top 3 favs
This. Game. Is. SO FRICKIN' AWESOME! You really made a good job and you already have a fan!
(Spoilers!)
You know... I wouldn't mind a few guys taking turns with me at Indulgence, although I know our overprotective husky wouldn't allow it that (not that I care about that personality type), but that begs the question: How does the Illayla's world see homosexuality? Also, the only thing I didn't like about the game was the "tooth story"...
I don't know, I felt kind of sad...
But, besides that, thanks so much for making this game! You're awesome! You have all my support and admiration, which doesn't seem much, but is genuine! Believe me!
I got to say the story is beautiful. The characters and how they act, the background and lore and hell IT EVEN HAS FUNNY MOMENTS HERE!!!! I love how you do this story its spontaneous. I hope you continue the story I really do.
How do I monetarily support you? Is there any way? I know you said this is a non-commercial project, but it's so good that I want to support you in some way! The visuals, the writing, the story, the audio (!!!), and (particularly important for visual novels) the pacing is just perfect. All of it is perfect. This is top tier stuff, Ryuo!
Really enjoyed this, really funny and love the sarcasm. Hardly any vn's where you play a human like this which is great! was getting tired of playing games and you play a character that is always needing help and is delicate and has to be looked after. Such a great change having a human you play with a fun attitude and does not need baby sitting. Great job! cant wait for the next update you got my full support with this.
Wow, that was very captivating! I couldn't stop playing and got the (current) end in one go :)
Spoilers:
Very interesting world, looking forward to see the Automonks and the Dark Lands. Also, the Infliction, the apocalypse and Byte are all quite intriguing! Looking forward to finding out more there!
The characters are all polished, i loved Aeyon, Byte and the tribeswomen!
The relationship between Loken and the main character is just heartwarming. You can tell they both need each other! I love how Loken wants to improve his speech after being a lone wolf (almost) his whole life. His protectiveness is so cute :D
Please continue this amazing project and you will have a follower forever <3
Don't feel the need to rush anything tho :)
soo good i neeeed moooore
The absolute chokehold this vn has on me already. You should consider a patreon for this game I'd definitely donate!