I can't wait for the next update! This VN is just too good, it hurts my very soul. It just goes so deep. I definitely do not recommend this to the fainthearted, but if you're looking for an amazing VN - and if you think you can handle it - This is definitely an experience you cannot miss out on!
And thanks to the creator! However I do have one question. Are you alright? This kind of story is so deep, it is not something you just make because you have some free time on your hands, this is a masterpiece, but its very dark. I myself have a mind that has made up so many different stories (and manages to do this all day, I don't know why people think men can't multitask cause at least my brain manages to do so), and, at least in my case, this kind of story originates from a bad experience, or worse. Not that it matters if it isn't caused by something like that, it is a masterpiece and I'm certainly not the only one that thinks so.
Just keep up the great work! I cant wait for the next part!
I understand. It was quite a surprise for me too! But let's be honest, it did make the entire moment 10x more exciting (and scary). This as well as the ending and a few other moments have really left a permanent mark on my soul.
Dude... he's a bastard at the start yet I do want to...but we can't because this does not have other dating routes, cuz this would be longer or would have other endings if so.
I was just emotionally devistated by a beautifully raw story. How I'm going to survive until the final chapter I do not know. All I know is that I need these two men to have a happy ending.
Just finished until the last update, I swear this is going better and better althought... No hate but I hope the writter... burn in hell. It's too fucking everything and the plottwist, the gut wrenching moments. Perfection! <3
I. Love. Byte! He is so well written, and will be genuinely sad when he's gone. More so than the last great character intergral to the story we tragically lost. 😢😭😥😓 R. I. P.
This was probably one of the most enjoyable games I've played, and the story is absolutely phenomenal and so many plot twists I didn't see coming. Easily a 10/10 for me.
Hey I've been playing since build 6, and I've absolutely loved your vn. I've been planning on restarting it once it's fully release, I'm super excited. ☺️
Wow. Just… fucking wow. Reading this made all my emotions fuck each other into a chaotic mess. I didn’t know what the hell to feel. It’s too much, too fucking complex. I feel like I’m having a literary heart attack and orgasm at the same damn time. It's a masterpiece.
Me finished both acts and waiting for updates. I think this nsfw`s warn of game isnt like more about sex-scenese... But gore and mind horror.
This novel impressed me a lot. I can say that I even practiced my English a little with it xD The story is very interesting, but sometimes it seems to me that it is because of the personal opinion of the main character. Why was there a question about free whill at the beginning, if the player hasn’t chosen anything for the main character, the main character still does it his own way. I see the message that no matter what the main character does, he will come to one point, it’s just that such an illusion of choice is sometimes annoying due to its absence.
The jokes and references in some places made me laugh out loud. Loken's rizz completely knocked me down. No chance to resist this big alpha hound 👁️👄👁️ At the same time, mind horror scenes didn't take me everywhere. These are my peculiarities and a rational assessment of the circumstances.
I'm waiting for updates, no matter what they are. Apathetic or whiny and joyful.
If I were the main character, I would only make two choices for myself - kill myself and let myself be killed; or completely ignore the world around me and live only for my loved one (at the very least, maybe I would have found out why the main character tends to ignore biological processes.. *spoilers* What will main character finds out *spoilers*)
I just finished act 1, and I have no words. It's true that, at first, the art style wasn't appealing to me (not because it's bad by any means, but because I enjoy more cartoonish vn), but I'm baffled at how inmersive this piece of art is.
At first, a was a bit dissapointed that there weren't too much music in it, but the more I was playing, the more I think the lack of music and the well placed sounds are the key points to make it so inmersive. Also, I think it contributes the huge amount of diferrent backgrounds images that makes you feel that you are in the world.
The characters: I love them all. I usually stop playing visual novels if I think the characters are boring or supperficial, but I can't find none of them in here. I normally have a clear favorite character in a visual novel, but here all are so good that it's hard for me to choose-.-
The writting is perfect for my taste: direct and not too much descriptive (which is a flaw I'm struggling with in my own visual novel-.-), so didn't i felt bored at any point, even in the most "silly parts".
[SPOILERS FROM HERE]
The only complaint I have I know it's a picky one but it's something that got me a bit confused, maybe because I didn't catch something because I'm not an english speaker but, if Alex cannot take food, how can he takes medicine? I'm pretty sure at the beginning he took some medicine for his injuries, but maybe I miss understood and he inhales it, or I missed some kind of explanation?
Noneless, 5 stars and I congratulate all the team for this amazing work;D
I don't know how to hide the answer under a spoiler, but the spoiler is the answer as I understood this part.
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Alex, as Byte said, does not need food or air, but still partially need breathes, which means he also need eats. He continues to drink water to stay hydrated. Water has minerals etc., so he is essentially eating water. He will only absorb these medicines poorly, but still absorb them. I don't think they will decay in him while he drinks water. There was a moment where Alex swallowed Loken's seed. Byte said to just wash it down to dilute it. Although, nevertheless, in the future Alex will eat the seed again through another hole... Whether he cleaned himself or left everything in himself is not said. 😈😈😈😈
Still, I think it's confusing. Even the water part, since water, to be absorbed, need your digestive system to work, but I remember Byte explaining that his digestive system is totally unoperative. The water I can pass it since it doesn't really need much to be absorbed, but medicine? Sure, it might not decay, but it wouldn't be absorbed either, so it would be unneffective. Maybe it's just because I studied biology at some point and I'm a bit picky with this but, as I said, it's really not important with all the good work it's put in in here.
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I can't wait for the next update! This VN is just too good, it hurts my very soul. It just goes so deep. I definitely do not recommend this to the fainthearted, but if you're looking for an amazing VN - and if you think you can handle it - This is definitely an experience you cannot miss out on!
And thanks to the creator! However I do have one question. Are you alright? This kind of story is so deep, it is not something you just make because you have some free time on your hands, this is a masterpiece, but its very dark. I myself have a mind that has made up so many different stories (and manages to do this all day, I don't know why people think men can't multitask cause at least my brain manages to do so), and, at least in my case, this kind of story originates from a bad experience, or worse. Not that it matters if it isn't caused by something like that, it is a masterpiece and I'm certainly not the only one that thinks so.
Just keep up the great work! I cant wait for the next part!
Love it❤️
I love their dynamic. And I cried so many times. GREAT FVN!
Now I replayed where they were at the tunnel to boneyard and what the fuck? I did not expect a cg for it, I left immediately cause I was alone😭
I understand. It was quite a surprise for me too! But let's be honest, it did make the entire moment 10x more exciting (and scary). This as well as the ending and a few other moments have really left a permanent mark on my soul.
I want to date Byte
Dude... he's a bastard at the start yet I do want to...but we can't because this does not have other dating routes, cuz this would be longer or would have other endings if so.
I want to have sex with Byte
He literally does not have a body what do you meann ToT
1 month more of waiting🥹
I was just emotionally devistated by a beautifully raw story. How I'm going to survive until the final chapter I do not know. All I know is that I need these two men to have a happy ending.
Just finished until the last update, I swear this is going better and better althought... No hate but I hope the writter... burn in hell. It's too fucking everything and the plottwist, the gut wrenching moments. Perfection! <3
Tahki i can only imagine them with a huge think souther accent
I. Love. Byte! He is so well written, and will be genuinely sad when he's gone. More so than the last great character intergral to the story we tragically lost. 😢😭😥😓 R. I. P.
This was probably one of the most enjoyable games I've played, and the story is absolutely phenomenal and so many plot twists I didn't see coming. Easily a 10/10 for me.
Hey I've been playing since build 6, and I've absolutely loved your vn. I've been planning on restarting it once it's fully release, I'm super excited. ☺️
Wow. Just… fucking wow. Reading this made all my emotions fuck each other into a chaotic mess. I didn’t know what the hell to feel. It’s too much, too fucking complex. I feel like I’m having a literary heart attack and orgasm at the same damn time. It's a masterpiece.
Me finished both acts and waiting for updates. I think this nsfw`s warn of game isnt like more about sex-scenese... But gore and mind horror.
This novel impressed me a lot. I can say that I even practiced my English a little with it xD The story is very interesting, but sometimes it seems to me that it is because of the personal opinion of the main character. Why was there a question about free whill at the beginning, if the player hasn’t chosen anything for the main character, the main character still does it his own way. I see the message that no matter what the main character does, he will come to one point, it’s just that such an illusion of choice is sometimes annoying due to its absence.
The jokes and references in some places made me laugh out loud. Loken's rizz completely knocked me down. No chance to resist this big alpha hound 👁️👄👁️ At the same time, mind horror scenes didn't take me everywhere. These are my peculiarities and a rational assessment of the circumstances.
I'm waiting for updates, no matter what they are. Apathetic or whiny and joyful.
If I were the main character, I would only make two choices for myself - kill myself and let myself be killed; or completely ignore the world around me and live only for my loved one (
at the very least, maybe I would have found out why the main character tends to ignore biological processes.. *spoilers* What will main character finds out *spoilers*)I just finished act 1, and I have no words. It's true that, at first, the art style wasn't appealing to me (not because it's bad by any means, but because I enjoy more cartoonish vn), but I'm baffled at how inmersive this piece of art is.
At first, a was a bit dissapointed that there weren't too much music in it, but the more I was playing, the more I think the lack of music and the well placed sounds are the key points to make it so inmersive. Also, I think it contributes the huge amount of diferrent backgrounds images that makes you feel that you are in the world.
The characters: I love them all. I usually stop playing visual novels if I think the characters are boring or supperficial, but I can't find none of them in here. I normally have a clear favorite character in a visual novel, but here all are so good that it's hard for me to choose-.-
The writting is perfect for my taste: direct and not too much descriptive (which is a flaw I'm struggling with in my own visual novel-.-), so didn't i felt bored at any point, even in the most "silly parts".
[SPOILERS FROM HERE]
The only complaint I have I know it's a picky one but it's something that got me a bit confused, maybe because I didn't catch something because I'm not an english speaker but, if Alex cannot take food, how can he takes medicine? I'm pretty sure at the beginning he took some medicine for his injuries, but maybe I miss understood and he inhales it, or I missed some kind of explanation?
Noneless, 5 stars and I congratulate all the team for this amazing work;D
I don't know how to hide the answer under a spoiler, but the spoiler is the answer as I understood this part.
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*
*Spoilers*
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*
Alex, as Byte said, does not need food or air, but still partially need breathes, which means he also need eats. He continues to drink water to stay hydrated. Water has minerals etc., so he is essentially eating water. He will only absorb these medicines poorly, but still absorb them. I don't think they will decay in him while he drinks water. There was a moment where Alex swallowed Loken's seed. Byte said to just wash it down to dilute it. Although, nevertheless, in the future Alex will eat the seed again through another hole... Whether he cleaned himself or left everything in himself is not said. 😈😈😈😈
Thanks for the answer:D
(SPOILER)
Still, I think it's confusing. Even the water part, since water, to be absorbed, need your digestive system to work, but I remember Byte explaining that his digestive system is totally unoperative. The water I can pass it since it doesn't really need much to be absorbed, but medicine? Sure, it might not decay, but it wouldn't be absorbed either, so it would be unneffective. Maybe it's just because I studied biology at some point and I'm a bit picky with this but, as I said, it's really not important with all the good work it's put in in here.