Out of the gate this is top tier. For a first build release to have this much content, such a blossoming storyline and the ability to create character bonds so strongly is incredible. I will very eagerly be following this project.
I thoroughly enjoy Screek. I love the story, the world, the characters. Byte could be my favourite! The conversations with him are hilarious. The vn is paced nicely. It felt like every scene moved the story forward in some way and I was never bored.
The setting is incredibly interesting and just really cool in my opinion. Also, the horror aspect is the coolest shit ever.
Loken I'm not a fan of, but I think at least his flaws all work story-wise. I'm invested, and I can't wait for more! What a fantastic vn :D
Really liking the vn, but if I may I would land a minor criticism — I feel like there is a little too much profanity int dialogue. I know it’s theoretically needed to highlight characters’ and their traits but for me it’s just gets in the way for most of the time. It isn’t particularly distracting but I would prefer it to be here as less as possible.
Beautiful work. The story really pulls you in and there are plenty of interesting characters to meet, especially our good hound, who has a lot more depth than what one would think at first glance... I am curious where the story will lead us and I wish best of luck with this passion project.
Finally a Vn that isnt cringe, has a amazing story, and the MC is not a whiny idiot who can't take being alone for two seconds and does the literal dumbest things possible. I friggin love it!
good story love how we did not stay in side for like 10 ch what vn would do that lol jk i love fbtw but its slow i love the world in this vn and idk if the demons can hurt ppl but can human i love how cool the human is but i want to see what he is heman shel as a back up that they used for the dna (cum) or a back up that did not boot right so they culd find the cure but never die and stay human cant wate
Jesus christ, the first build was like…5× longer than what I expected, so far I absolutely adore everything about this! The characters, world building, art, humor, etc. I’m excited to see more!
Dude this is great! really loving it so far :D The world and everything is really unique and interesting, and I think you've really wrote the characters quite well.
I really enjoyed this. It's taken quite a few tropes from the FVN space and really used them in a way that's quite engaging. I'll be looking forward to future updates.
Wow...just wow...my hat is off too you. This VN is something I want to support. I will be watching for the next update. This made it on my top 5 list for sure. It runs really good on pc btw. No bugs.
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Loved the VN, it's a great read! Can't wait to see where it goes in the future.
One minor typo: "ogle" is misspelled as "oggle" at one point.
Out of the gate this is top tier. For a first build release to have this much content, such a blossoming storyline and the ability to create character bonds so strongly is incredible. I will very eagerly be following this project.
woww a spectacular start! well done!
Just wow, one of my favorites for sure. Amazing VN so far.
I thoroughly enjoy Screek. I love the story, the world, the characters. Byte could be my favourite! The conversations with him are hilarious. The vn is paced nicely. It felt like every scene moved the story forward in some way and I was never bored.
The setting is incredibly interesting and just really cool in my opinion. Also, the horror aspect is the coolest shit ever.
Loken I'm not a fan of, but I think at least his flaws all work story-wise. I'm invested, and I can't wait for more! What a fantastic vn :D
Really liking the vn, but if I may I would land a minor criticism — I feel like there is a little too much profanity int dialogue. I know it’s theoretically needed to highlight characters’ and their traits but for me it’s just gets in the way for most of the time. It isn’t particularly distracting but I would prefer it to be here as less as possible.
Otherwise a really good vn
Really good, I can't wait to enter the blackzones!
Beautiful work. The story really pulls you in and there are plenty of interesting characters to meet, especially our good hound, who has a lot more depth than what one would think at first glance... I am curious where the story will lead us and I wish best of luck with this passion project.
Finally a Vn that isnt cringe, has a amazing story, and the MC is not a whiny idiot who can't take being alone for two seconds and does the literal dumbest things possible. I friggin love it!
I'm fucking speechless....One of the best vn's so far!! Like duuuuuude.....I want more!
good story love how we did not stay in side for like 10 ch what vn would do that lol jk i love fbtw but its slow i love the world in this vn and idk if the demons can hurt ppl but can human i love how cool the human is but i want to see what he is heman shel as a back up that they used for the dna (cum) or a back up that did not boot right so they culd find the cure but never die and stay human cant wate
love it cant wait for more
That was a fantastic (long) first episode. I'm already invested in the story-telling.
I think the art was nice, lol, hard to say because I was fixated by the story!
Nice to see all the usual FVN tropes twisted and re-invented in such an imaginative way.
5*****!
Wow, heckin awesome so far, great work, :D!
OMG it was so good, next build when? :> <3
Time to make this vn popular
Let’s go boys
Awesome .The Writing is well done I love it how Loken talks would love to hear it too and the art is well made too. looking forward for more content.
Interesting, looking forward to future updates.
Omg I'm so loving this game
Jesus christ, the first build was like…5× longer than what I expected, so far I absolutely adore everything about this! The characters, world building, art, humor, etc. I’m excited to see more!
I really really REALLY enjoyed all of it!!!! Cant wait for more , i want to and *will* support this! I hope the best for this project and you guys!
Dude this is great! really loving it so far :D
The world and everything is really unique and interesting, and I think you've really wrote the characters quite well.
awesome job :)
I really enjoyed this. It's taken quite a few tropes from the FVN space and really used them in a way that's quite engaging. I'll be looking forward to future updates.
Wow...just wow...my hat is off too you. This VN is something I want to support. I will be watching for the next update. This made it on my top 5 list for sure. It runs really good on pc btw. No bugs.
I am happy to report that this runs flawlessly in Linux.
:)
Now I just have to find the time to read through it, haha.